I can’t believe he hurt me/And not even care at all... those two tenses are not the same

I like the thing about your friends because that's very true to life. Also like the ending... very jaded.

it's brokenheart by the way but it seems there's a lot of hope without giving up in love.

A heart doth be same
For years to come
A quest for love that won't end
Till you find the one

Nicely written... sad, but nice.

~Yusuf

this is rather nice, but sad. but its always good to pick up the pieces
(i dont have much in the form of constructive criticism, but i can say its not your best work, but still rather good)

A familiar topic, but you might as well leave it up, it's part of your collection of work.

Sometimes the rhythm is a bit off and I feel you could have made use of punctuation to improve the piece, but it was an interesting read.