 camikaza 2008-08-05 . chapter 10Aw! That was just so cute! I really loved the ending ( again) and how Danny finally gets his way ^^
Although not very surprising, it was very sweet, thanks for writing this fic! |
 camikaza 2008-08-05 . chapter 9Oy sorry for the late review, but I was on vacation for four weeks...Anyhow, this will be rather short, because I really want to read on, but I liked this chapter as well!
Thanks! |
 Mage Dudette 2008-07-11 . chapter 10aww, i liked this story! "short n' sweet" seems to fit perfectly, sometimes writing something thats not a huge novel is more difficult than a short story and i think you did it really well :) i empathised with the separate characters easily, and there was enough going on to give a nice flow and direction. :) i'll read more of your stories too (just not.. yet, i can't promise anything!)
thanks for a quick update too! i only found this last week sometime!
'dudette |
 navajo 2008-07-11 . chapter 10lol...loved the sappiness :P and can we say whipped i cant believe he got adam to just do that with no fuss, cant wait for more |
 navajo 2008-07-05 . chapter 9love the story cant wait for more |
 rainbowveins92 2008-07-05 . chapter 9this story is soo goodd!
i can't wait for more |
 Guatemalan Rocker chikk 2008-06-27 . chapter 8 nice !
haha. i would so love to run into somebody's arms.
ah.. i can day dream about it all day..
ahahaha
well, i like the story :]
how much more until it finishes?
jack better end up being gay.
daniel is a ..junior in high school? |
 camikaza 2008-06-27 . chapter 8Awesome chapter, again. I wonder if they really would get an A, I think they will XD
Next chapter, damce! XD |
 Abstruse Blue 2008-06-23 . chapter 7Jack better get it together! Poor Danny. And what could Adam be saying? So curious. |
 camikaza 2008-06-23 . chapter 7Great chapter, can't wait for more! Am curious now what Adam said to Daniel... |
 AbbeyEileen 2008-06-22 . chapter 7I try, lol.
I forget: Was there a reason Adam is mad at Daniel? It's not because of the whole Parker thing, right? Or was he just taking Jarrod's side?
We should see more of Sam. And I don't blame Daniel for being upset, but, well... what Sam tells him (that he's just confused) makes more sense than he wants to hear. He needs to realise what's right in front of his face.
Whew. Okay. Sorry about that. |
 gummybaby 2008-06-13 . chapter 6wtf was that? Evil Jack, how could he do that to poor Danny? oh well, I hope things work out in the end...and I wonder what's up with Adam... |
 camikaza 2008-06-13 . chapter 6Aw...How beautiful and sad and cute...I really hope Daniel's gonna be alright, because they're so cute together...And it's hard for him now that his friends won't talk either...
Well done! I hope you're gonna update fast! ^^ |
 AbbeyEileen 2008-06-13 . chapter 6Hm... so either Jack is self-conscious or raised in a really strict household and is trying but failing to rebel... or maybe he's just scared? Hmm... lol good chapter. short, but good. |
 gummybaby 2008-06-06 . chapter 5Meat Loaf? lol. Jack and Danny are adorable together. And it's hartening to know you have a plan for this story and are actually following it! |