Sad and evocative. And hooray for loosely-patterned rhyming... big fan of that. ;)

Other-worldly, I enjoyed the oil painting-esque imagery I gleaned from this.

Normally I despise people who post 5 poems at once, but I liked this. I might come back and read more of your work later, I just hope it is all as good as this.

Take care and keep writing!

Alan.