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| MK 2008-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abusehmm...interesting start. The voice is pretty strong throughout though you really don't go into much detail on anything. my favorite line however: "Home again, home again, jigidy jig." once more with my fever iduced hazy i started cackling...heh :P neways I wnat more plz!! I need entertainment sitting home bored as I am for the nxt few days. MK |
| Sandy 2008-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abusenice |
| VelvetSea 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseI like it so far =) A few grammar problems (oh AP English exam, how fun you will be...) but I'm intrigued. I'm sensing a lot of personal experience lol |