hmm...interesting start. The voice is pretty strong throughout though you really don't go into much detail on anything.

my favorite line however: "Home again, home again, jigidy jig." once more with my fever iduced hazy i started cackling...heh :P

neways I wnat more plz!! I need entertainment sitting home bored as I am for the nxt few days.

MK

nice

I like it so far =) A few grammar problems (oh AP English exam, how fun you will be...) but I'm intrigued. I'm sensing a lot of personal experience lol