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Jennifer
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseI love your poetry.

So the Locksmith ate the Owl, which is also how you get the cat out of the house? Awesome.

(I lost my appetite)

I like your use of anaphora's! and the internal rhyme. Or is it end rhyme?

Anyways, This is funny and so very good.

-Jennifer.

(and my keyboards messed up again.)
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