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| shiboo 2008-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseLOL that was funny |
| Ty Coley 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThree words: FAN-TAS-TIC! I love this story! It's excellent! :calms down: Ok, I'm back to normal now. So let's critique this baby! First and foremost, it's EXTREMELY long. Now, while that may be a tiny problem for some people, but people like me LOVE it. It's something I can sit down and sink my teeth into. I didn't notice many ( if any) grammatical errors, which is always a good thing. The story is good, it flows to where it's not too fast to where I miss important stuff, but it's not slow to where I want you to speed up the storyline. Second, I think it's extremely weird (or coincendental) that I spent all days looking at catgirl stuff on , and when I decide to look at a new story here, there's CAT PEOPLE involved. I do have a question: are all of the characters cat people, or is it just Clive and Triss? Ok, what else do I need to add in here; I noticed you had Will Du as one of your characters (I caught that reference; not many others though). Overall, I like it and it's added to my favorite authors/stories list. Keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next chapter |