|Reviews for The Sapphire Rose|
| Enodia of the Star 5/23/08 . chapter 1
It was bittersweet but very good.
| Chris Gibson 5/15/08 . chapter 1
wow. This story is amazing and sweet. It flows just like an old legend or a fairytale from a book. Good job and keep up the good work!
| Birdi-V 5/14/08 . chapter 1
this was great! I loved the detail you put into it! And what could the condition have been? How mysterious...
| misery sister 5/13/08 . chapter 1
[...nails that were longer that her arm.]
I like how you use third person, so it's like we're reading a real fairytale. And your use of words helps this theme you have going of a fairytale you tell to your kid when in bed.
Although, I think you could have added a bit more mystique when it came to her meeting the gargoyles. You should add a bit more anticipation and tension in the air - and also, as the story neared its end, it didn't hold the same story-like feel to it anymore. It sort of... dwindled. But it was entertaining.
| Ash Algood 5/13/08 . chapter 1
i liked it, there was alot of detail but i dont get the ending nd u never specified what the old gargoyle was going to say but all in all it was pretty entertaining