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| no.peace.los.angeles 2008-07-06 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful. I love the imagery and how you used "swelling/straining." Nicely done. Keep writing! :) |
| stained blue 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuseyou have a brilliant way of describing things, like you're really there. |
| giacide 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's really well written, yet disjointed. It makes you want to try and imagine. Good one. |
| perdita 2008-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abusewhen i read this it creates a very good place not like situation wise but vibe wise "'I remember in summer, the w ay we couldn't go out...'" what a ** feeling i hate it |
| Lost In Context 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseSounds like home to me. ...Love the bit about the fault and the roads. |