|Reviews for opposites attract|
| painted eyes 5/14/08 . chapter 1
I LOVE the last lines! It makes a really good twist to the poem! Keep up the good work!
| Cloverless 5/14/08 . chapter 1
Ohh. Those last three lines are cold (in a good way). I actually felt my heart reach down, and beat my own kidneys into submission, it was so bittersweet.
Very well done; those last three lines turn it from a cutesy pomm, into a powerful one.