I really like the first stanza because of the alliteration. The punctuation and capitalization are a bit all over the place, I might work on that. I like the piece a lot though, its really relatable and well done.

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This was excellent, I especially love the second stanza. And 'sometimes faith is well-deserved so trust more than your sight' that is very true. If only some people weren't so quick to judge. Wonderful job on this. Keep it Up!