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| kloun doll 2008-06-24 ch 1,  | abusethere are more chapters? the story was very well written, I like the plot about the meaning of life and love things, |
| PirateLass01 2008-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is Great Edi! Keep writing-please! PirateLass01 (Fanfiction name) |
| cheese girl 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI didn't actually read this story but i will later. I'm sure it's awesome. I can't read it now i have D&T nwork to do. DON'T Do D&T in year 10. |
| Bavand 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseI thought the characterization of the Greek gods was fabulous. And hopefully not throwing you into total confusion, as a scriptwriter (stage & screen), I love building stories just through dialog. It needs some ironing out, but otherwise it's a very good first shot. So, when are we going to see some more...? Julie |
| Aoife129 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abusethis was very cute. i look forward to reading more from you. |
| WeAreAllMadHere 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. The ideas in this give me something to think about but I must say I would love to see you improve on more details instead of all speech. Without doing this you are leaving out the emotion and it feels really rushed. You are already an excellent writer but I think you can improve. Nienna (WeAReAllMadHere) |
| wildcard07 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseIt's okay. :) nice work for a first story^^ makes one think. Go work on giving your story more action...more drama through words of movement so that the readers can feel the power of emotions you wish to communicate through the piece.^^ |