I love the wording in this. And I also wanted to say i actually loved your review and thank you for it! I love it when things are said intelligently to me, like when they are things I disagree with but can still really understand, and I can really understand.
Good use of words and like.. thought process I guess would be the best way to say it, in this poem, and mad reviewing skillz.

I like yours better than mine. It's well written and has better word structure. I like it.