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| simpleplan13 2008-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseI really like this line "in retrospective respect" because of the alliteration and play on words so we can say loves just another... love's I really like how the first line and the last line are so different. Like writing the piece made you come to some realization, that was really interesting. Great piece. PS If you're bored this weekend, check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
| sugarlessgirl 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseditto, sometimes i feel that way too. nice composition! |