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| rishyyfishyyfailuree.heyyki... 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseoh my god! i love this so so so much. its pretty much amazing! i love: You’re walking through a field Of black daffodils And a heart skating on thin ice Come on baby Don’t be scared, take my hand Make me feel what it feels like to be you the most! keep up the amazing work! |
| weedoutofthepot 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was overall very well written. At parts, it felt somewhat cheezy but I like your use of imagery, which I've been seeing in your other songs too. |
| Flameziz 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseAnd another good song from Little Black Piano. Good songs so far keep it up! |
| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abusebeautiful |