oh my god!
i love this so so so much. its pretty much amazing!

i love:
You’re walking through a field

Of black daffodils

And a heart skating on thin ice

Come on baby

Don’t be scared, take my hand

Make me feel what it feels like to be you
the most!

keep up the amazing work!

This was overall very well written. At parts, it felt somewhat cheezy but I like your use of imagery, which I've been seeing in your other songs too.

And another good song from Little Black Piano. Good songs so far keep it up!

beautiful