Great job on the dialogue. I feel sorry for the woman behind it. Some parts made me smile. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

from the summary i was expecting a crazy old bag lady doing the babbling. apparently it's a hot chick! nice surprise. the dialogue didn't sound realistic to me at some points, but it seems like it'd translate well into a spoken monologue, and i absolutely hate reading those.

ditto on ms. f's comments-- i wish she'd given us more clues about her past. great character, though! reminds me of someone i know, actually-- a really hot girl who i could totally imagine growing old with a house full of cats. XD