Aww. This poem is great. It reminds me of my ex boyfriend. We were together for over a year... thought we were in love. Then one day we just fell apart and that was that. We were over. Times are short so cherrish them while they're there.

A couple typos, but I like this. Reminded me of a friend with whom my frienship recently ended.

~Yusuf

This is really sad, and the details, like 'or not even say a word to me online' make it realistic and let the emotion come across well. I can relate to it, too, once my friend sort of didn't talk to me for a while and now it seems like it never happened. Anyway,, nice job.

This is beautiful, really heartfelt and hopefully everything turned out okay with you and your friend. This reminds me so much of a friend and I. It is crazy how people can just stop something, act like it never happened.

keep it up.

it reminds me of when I had a fight with a friend, well, it's horrible when you don't know very well why your friend got mad at you.

I like the start; It's reflective and sweet.

I think this might work better in verses to convey the different stages. Also, perhaps, with a more aligned line length.

In "My heart is braking" I think you meant "breaking" .

Keep going,
ImoT