Your word choices are very powerful and just seem 'right.' I like it.

I love it when I find a poem that actually forces me to think. To go beyond the surface and finger at what's underneath; it's refreshing. Though with all of the blatant words I read everyday, it's become a bit harder. Well, practice you know. I adored the first [stanza? thought? compilation of words?] where you describe the rain, because the imagery was fantastic. I really enjoyed it. And if I were less tired I would try and figure out every seam of this poem, but I'm practically dead as it is. Good job, I enjoyed your poem.