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| Momiji K. Sohma 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseThe last line made me laugh. :3 |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. I may not really agree with what it says, but the conversational tone of the poem and the way you convey your belief was well done. It contrasts with your pen-name though :) -Silence |
| SHOUToutLOUD 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI SO AGREE especially with the chocolate doves part!! You know me the CHOCOHOLIC, HEHEHEHEHEHE! ANYWAY, This one is good short and sweet and to the point! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) |