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| l-Winter-l 2008-08-28 ch 1,  | abuseHow I LOVE the use of floral imagery! You my dear, are a master of it! Such sweet simplicty in this peice works woners. You certainly have talent! |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseLovely poem. the imagery of the lone rose pining on her stem is just wonderful. :) |
| fallenflame13 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. Nice work. |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseDon't quite know what to say to this, apart from the fact that it's beautiful ^^ Nice piece. |
| Aelfin 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI love how you can say so much in so little words. Its really amazing- 'Since the lovely are sleeping, go sleep with them.' Thats such beautiful imagery =] Aelfi x |
| Nemonus 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like the twist to optimism at the end and the 'name' "Love One". "It is" in the very beginning could be left out: personally i'm not fond of 'to be' verbs in poems. |
| McKinley Cooper 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThis could mean so much to so many. As I am not a fresh , dew-covered rose anymore, it speaks of age and the decay of beauty (physical, at least). It's compassionate and upsweeping in every syllable. McKinley |
| miscellanea 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseThat was really lovely. Really exceptional poetry, keep it up. |
| Thoughtful Silence 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this! The imagery is wonderful and I love the kind of despodent yet beautiful tone... conveyed perfectly by the last two lines. The capital letters and archaic language was a nice touch, adding to the florid flow of this. Good job! -Thoughtful |