hey! i recon u should make it into a story!!its relli good'

That was real cute. :D Despite a few spelling and grammatical errors, I actually enjoyed this. I loved the whole reference to Sleeping Beauty, as well. Good job. :D


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Very nice work! I love the dialogue! :D

I really like this. I enjoyed the relationship between Jared and Anastasia. I hope you make this into a full story.

I really like this one-shot. I pictured Jared kinda as Reid Garwin before even knowing it was based on him hahahaha.

a very good one

I really liked this oneshot. The way you write is amazing, I really liked how you described everything when you wrote about the cutting...you made it sound almost darkly beautiful. The whole thing with Jared is really cute and this should become a full story because you already have a good first chapter. It can only get better right? HAHA XP
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This is really really good!

this is amazing cute:)

Very nice story. I liked how she realized that nothing is easy in life, and that sleeping beauty is by herself, like the rest of us.

Naki-chan
My name is Rikku
And I Cry These Tears Of Blood
As a wonderful gift to you.