This seems like a really great story to start with. Okay...um firstly. Keep writing! Its awesome. Its uber cool! Blah blah blah. I want to marry you! Etc etc.

Haha sorry. But seriously, do keep writing. Please? Pretty please?

Okay 2. Really good spelling and grammar which is a total relief. There are few stories on this site that are well written.

3. I think it was a little brief maybe? Not enough starting info?

Well, I don't know. I just like the story =)
Very very muchly indeed.

Update soon!

ellejay xox

I love it! You should definetly update it has great ptoential, even the summary was fantastic! What happened to your other story though? Anyway, looking forward to more!