|Reviews for Alice in Chains|
| Soosie 11/9/08 . chapter 5
I think I liked that shaman. It frustrates me so much that Yohru can't understand that she should stay away from Alice! But I guess it's all part of the story and I'll have to figure out what will happen next, or wait. Ai seems interesting...she raises many questions. For instance, why is she wearing a Lolita dress, similar to Alice's? Is is some sort of connection between the two?
I guess I'll have to find out. I found little to no grammar errors, but the dialogue seems a bit choppy and without description.
Keep up the good story-writing!
| MAMI07 10/21/08 . chapter 1
Keep up the good work! Loved it!
| Tragedy of Light and Dark 10/21/08 . chapter 4
I can't believe I forgot to read this update, geez. Anyway, this is really interesting and Alice is just as creepy as ever! W00t! Update soon!
| Dark Angel Hiroshima 10/20/08 . chapter 4
This will definitely be interesting. I wonder how long the shaman will haunt her and what it wants.
| Kurogane Black Ninja 10/20/08 . chapter 4
This just keeps getting more and more interesting. Alice is definitely up to something and I'll have to watch for her. I wonder what she has in store for poor Yohru. I really like the shaman spirit. It's so beautiful in my mind.
Keep up the good work!
| Soosie 10/17/08 . chapter 4
I've noticed a few grammar errors in your work. I know that you will edit them, but just in case, I'll let you know that there are some letters that are missing and some verbs that are gone.
But I'm really looking forward to what will happen with the shaman! I don't know where you get these ideas, but Alice seems really creepy. It's dark, but intriguing all at once. I'm looking forward to more.
| Utena Himemiya 10/17/08 . chapter 4
This is a wonderful chapter! I hope you update soon! Sorry for the short review but work let out! Must go!
| SilverIsamu 10/17/08 . chapter 4
I tried to review you earlier but fictionpress was being ignormant. sigh, i get no love. i don't feel like using caps either. i'm really tired and it's only 2 here. Ugh, for a friday it is definitely tiring. Oh well I have the weekend at least.
anyway, this had nothing to do with your story. i like the haunted box thing and i wonder why the fish is possessing it...this is really intersting. i also like the dreams that yohru is having with it. i want to see what happens and what kind of message its trying to tell her.
| Dark Kurogane 10/17/08 . chapter 4
Alice is as creepy as always. I wonder what she has in store for the young girl.
I was wondering when Yhoru would find herself in trouble once again. Michi seems like trouble for she and Haji's relationship, I would definitely be suspicious of her if I were Yohru.
Shaman huh? This should be interesting...I look forward to your next installment. I'll check on this story next week for an update.
| Iruka-sama 10/17/08 . chapter 4
It's been a while since I've read this story. I had to re-read it so I could get what's happening again. I really love the characters in this story, especially Yohru and Alice. Both of them are very interesting.
I look forward to your next chapter!
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 10/17/08 . chapter 4
Ask and I shall recieve! I should have asked earlier, lol. Giant killer fish sure are bad for Yohru, aren't they? I really like this chapter. the shaman seems interesting. I wonder how Yohru will deal with being haunted by it.
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 10/17/08 . chapter 1
When will this be updated? I want to read more!
| OneWingedAngel666 10/10/08 . chapter 3
You never fail to amaze me! Keep up the good work. Sorry i havent reviewed in a while. I have yet to update my own. -.-;; I am looking forward for more!
| Dark Angel Hiroshima 7/7/08 . chapter 3
Hm, so Yohru did run into Alice again. I wonder why Alice hates being called a hero, and what's in store for Yohru...I'm intrigued.
| Kurogane Black Ninja 7/7/08 . chapter 3
I have to wonder what exactly Yohru just got herself into...I can't wait until the next chapter.