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| Melody X. 2008-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseAw... Floaty feelings! |
| Franziska 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseDie englische Variante detailreicher und zärtlicher, aber ohne dass ich es richtig begründen kann ist die deutsche mir lieber. |
| LowTension 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHey I like this poem. Although it is short, it gives the reader a feeling of endless happiness. Short and sweet! And also, I suggest you to write something else besides "shining from your eyes" because sunrise and light is already references to light. This could create some more depth for your poem. |