|Reviews for The first angel|
| xxCassidyVictoriaxx 11/22/10 . chapter 1
Great poem. I loved the lines 'Beauty isn't always the pretty things/when you cry so much until you have tear no more/the only option is... smile.'
| simpleplan13 5/30/08 . chapter 1
The ending was double spaced for some reason.
I like this. It's sweet... a bit cliched at the end, but still full of emotions.
| AshleyTerra 5/26/08 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed your imagery. I don't know if you intended to so, but the '...' made it seem more thoughtful and the font made it seem more dream like.
| East-0f-Eden 5/20/08 . chapter 1
that was a very good story. told in verse too. I thought it was bittersweet. keep writting!
| illusionistic 5/16/08 . chapter 1
like the overall idea you have going on here, and you go through with it well. (:
might wanna take a look at some of your grammar, though.
'his clothing were tore'
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 5/15/08 . chapter 1
This is truly one of the most beautiful things i've ever read. Great job! adding to favs!