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heyitsstupidme 11/6/12 . chapter 1Beautiful. It's short, but the few words really say a lot. I love it. :) |
all you need is oxygen 9/30/08 . chapter 1i love this. i love how the ungirly knees seem to mean so much more. "you gave me a look which clearly meant you were interested/i stared at my shoes which clearly meant i was interested too". those lines were perfect. |
Kneecap 7/7/08 . chapter 1Last line was a definite clincher. Yep. I liked the whole 'missed opportunity' thing. The last line really hammered things in. Yeah, yeah, yeah, can't think of much else to say now...I've reviewed everything of yours. Guh. I know this is unrelated, but you should really write a story one day. 'The Call' was just incredible. It knocked me over backwards (metaphorically). Yeah. Innit, tschuss sweetie! Sorry I didn't favourite any of your poems, but I liked your oneshots more. |
i'd delete this if possible 6/16/08 . chapter 1-low whistle- Ouch. I can relate to that, the regret, the missed shot. I love how you tied the 'staring at your shoes' type of interested in at the end. I think this was really clever. |