This story has a great start. I like the idea of the innocent somehow capturing the darker mind of the vampire. I am looking forward to getting to know these characters and seeing how they impact each other. So far the pacing seems good. I hope it will slow down a little as the story moves along.
I can't wait to read the rest of the story!!

Ahahaha! well that was glorious fun! im happy the two stories mixed. Though im a bit confused about how this eludes to Gabriel's POV. I'm guessing this is after the church seen? but it also sounded alot like when he first appeared on earth (the whole knowing where the door was). I love the Gabriel with...plant powers... :P Also quite curious about this "Cernobyl" and "Ancients". XD you're amazing! (Its not easy to keep me this focused on a story/series)

Wow, plot twists much! Crazy intricate story! I love it! I want to know what happened between Elis and Jacob though! I think they're adorable. Anyways, nicely done.

...for some reason...i'm a bit worried about Mr.Nelson...i dont trust him much...D:

lovin it

Wow, you don't suck at sex scenes at all and you're a lot bolder then a lot of other writers, but that's not a bad thing!

They're both so unstable, hope they are better by the end.

-head/desk- WHY Did I totally not expect that? I did in fact read the first one, but oh lord. -smacks self- I did TOTALLY not get the connection between the son Gabriel and the... other Gabriel! Amazing writing! Amazing sex too (-blushes-) Augh. My cat is yelling! ;o; -leaves to go and take care of wtf/e she's freaking about- ANYWAY, Now that I am back, I must go on in my rant about how amazing this is! This whole story area thing is-- HOLY CRAA- -faints- Holy ** Tiger just jumped on the back of my chair and scared the crap out of me. Anyway, this really drew me in! The characters are really easy to identify with, the emotions are intense and now I wanna know more of what happens to them. -pout-
Well, yes! I loved the story, love your writing style and would love my cat if she wasn't sitting on my bladder! Goodnight and I wish you a joyous winter festival of your choice!!
-Wd

I'm sorry for swearing but Oh. My. **. God!
They found...they found...! I can't even type coherently!
Oh My God!
Gabriel! And his mother and his son.

Oh My God!

You must update OTE so the entire two gangs will be united! I expected Gabriel to be Pat's son but I didn't make the other connection until later.

Once again: Oh My God!

Update OTE!

HigherMagic x

Okay, now I have to admit, when I first tried reading this story, it didn't catch my attention, and now that I'm reading it again I realized how stupid I was back then xD This is cool so far, and I would read more tonight but unfortunately people think I need sleep. So...sigh.

One small criticism, though. With many of your stories, your couples consist of one member being obviously more dominant with the other. I can see the advantages of this, but sometimes it can be overkill. That's why I like Kalin and Cade in OTE (hinthint write more! lol =P) because they are fairly equal, but one is dominant.

So, there's just that. I shall read more tomorrow.

HigherMagic x

PS - Get writing on Over the Edge and Leviathan! >.

-shocked eyes- OMG.


PLEASE WHAT EVER YOU DO, UPDATE ANY STORY! PLEASE TE OTHER ONES, I'M DYING OF SUSPENSE -cries-

please...update the other ones

HOLY CRAP! Is like Gabriel - Gabriel from the other series. I was totally blown out of way when you mentioned it!

Now I'm gonna read the rest xD

Wow that was just totally stunning. I guess we have found the king's lover now. I wonder the full extent of alarian powers though. do you think you could like write up a family tree for all these people before i get terribly confused xD

I forgot to say... Gabriel can control plants now? Thants so cool!!

Oh wow! That was really good! I'm really into this story :D I suck at reviews, so sorry, but I cant wait to read more! The suspense is killing me, cant wait to find out what happens! and Pat gets her son back, with a grandson too, so happy! poor Eric and Keenan, wont they ever get some alone time? There's a lot going on here, :D cant wait!

OOH! I was SO waiting for this! I had a feeling as soon as you added M&MV under the Kaldor ark that Gabi was going to turn up as Pat's son. poor Keenan, he really has a rough time of it. well at least he is well compensated for his troubles *wiggles eyebrows* A wonderful Finale! Brava Brava! now, about that update on OTE... ^^