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fleur de l'est 2008-07-07 . chapter 1
I like the subtlety in the expression of emotions, because at first I thought you were almost complaining about not being able to be anything else, and telling people "that's the best I can do so get over it". Not much pride. But there was actually a tint of pride towards the end and it makes the piece seem calm yet glitters with reminiscence. Well done! (And I'm sure you'll feel that way one day :P)
~fleur
fatbird33 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
"Than strained imperfection" loved that line.
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