QUOTE: that made me lol while replying and reporting them for abuse. what a troll.

No no no THIS made me 'lol'. Great comeback and great English by the way. That was SO intelligent, especially the troll part. ;)

This really hit me hard for some reason...Thank you much for helping me through just by writing this! :D

wonderful descriptions.. vivid.. nicely written ;)

between you & i?.. this might be intentional, but it's actually me

I like the way the story in this piece flows with the whole strings and lines things because it was interesting and attached the different pieces of it. I also like the format because the parenthesis seemed to work well in the piece.

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Gorgeous diction and imagery. The poem really builds to the ending. I especially love the alliteration on "teardrops tumble" and the lines "i'll take a step forward/i'll be the first to reach you." Amazing job ... I think this poem does a really good job of painting this vivid attraction and repulsion concept pertaining to a connection with others. Keep writing, k.

Hm... i like it, its deep and rooted but the flow needs to be fixed a bit. And you should try to stay away from repeating the same words more then once unless it follows a certain pattern. But keep it up. You'll be fine

wow, that's wonderful, the imagery is very sweet and nice.