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Reviews For: Lonely Alone
truebleu 2009-10-13 . chapter 1
Your way of asking for a review was funny.
So here it is.
I really liked the story.
But it seems Ryan has some...trust issues.
I thought it was very amusing.
I also like Claire, the purple-haired, melon lip-gloss wearing individualist.
cheergurl12 2009-01-22 . chapter 1
hahahaah i like this, its different from all the typical "oneshots" :D
Rhapsody's Song 2008-12-31 . chapter 1
Cute. Not really resolved, but cute. It feels like there's more to the story though...
CarlyJo 2008-10-01 . chapter 1
was this a Covenant fic? I loved it!
TCATH57 2008-05-16 . chapter 1
Wow this was really good. I like it you should do a longer story like this if you already haven't. Spelling and grammer were good too.
daylessdreamer21 2008-05-16 . chapter 1
beautiful!
love it!
good story!
Pione 2008-05-16 . chapter 1
Interesting. :)
Just Keep Living 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
gah, it was awesome!
excuse me while I get a drink of milk to cool down
LOL
HarderToBreathe... 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
This is a nice piece of one-shot. Ryan is a pretty needy guy. hahaha!
Leivyra 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
And I shall feed you some reviews! :D

I liked it very much, I say! :D I like how she's independent and all, but she's not denying that she cares for him, you know? She's not like those "You mean nothing to me" independent girls...
Impersonating Sugar 2008-05-15 . chapter 1
A couple spelling errors, but cute. I'm guessing a notorious player has fallen for a Goth? of all people? Seems kind of an epilogue. Maybe you could write what exactly happened between them in those last seven months?
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