i really like the internal rhyming scheme you carry out through the first three stanzas. the first stanza i especially liked, i think because of the phrasing of the thoughts.

nothing in this poem seems particularly forced; its very natural. i would say perhaps avoid cliches, however they are not quite so prominent in your poem, because of how you convey your thoughts

very nice :)

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I liked your words were not forced and therefore makes the poem much more powerful.

I like how you seperate each stanza with each topic revolving around the main idea. Very nice!

that's how I feel too; and it's hardly been a year. way to put it in words.