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| DisturbedKittenWriter 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI like this one a lot, but it reminds me a little too much of 'national treasure'. I would add to the story to make it more original. The descriptions are much better in this one. You also didn't repeat yourself as often as you did in the stories from 9th, 10th and 11th grade. Great job :) |
| Meggielu 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI like them all. You can definitely see the improvement :D. I also like how you incorporated them into your presentation, you did a great job. And everybody was highly impressed with your Spanish abilities! They're better than mine! ;) Meghan |