Interesting, once again.

I found myself unable to believe in some of the characters at times though. An example wpuld be Bear, who occasionally came across as more intelligent than he should be from his description at times. I could comtinue to pick it apart, but I will not, because I enjoyed it.

It was a well told little tale and I like your originality.

Keep writing, FP needs more creativity and you display yours well.

Alan.