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John 2008-06-05 . chapter 1
I read through this seeing as i haven't got to read one of your books in a long time and I have to say wow. its really good and I did try to scrutinize. There is very little that I could say Ehh... about. All I could find was the "arghs" and your normal "pshah-edness" that in some instances kinda ruined the mood. The overall thought it seems you put in seem to show you enjoyed writing this.
The Un-great-ful 2008-05-16 . chapter 1
I was going to criticise you, constructively, when writing this review, but I thought better of it.

You've written this your way I have realised, and it is a lovely read, full of imagery.

Glad I read it, perhaps we'll cross paths again on here in the future.

Keep writing,

Alan.
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