continue!

This story was very well written, and it succeeds at drawing you into its fantastic world. I already want to know more about Tawny, and the conclusion of her story.

That's the end? Sad. Nice work though.

That's true isn't it, all heroes find a way home in the end...it's kinda cliche. THANK YOU FOR CHANGING THAT!

By the way, what language is Eshi u ame?

Isn't that the truth though? Love the grandma, hate the grandson. BUT AT LEAST THEY MAKE GOOD COOKIES!

Well that's mean. Hello miss! How 'bout a nice cup of coffee, oh, and a nice dungeon...or a gallow...how 'bout an axe?

If I were Tawny I would have flicked that fairy thing away faster than it could squeak.

Tawny just isn't having a good time, is she?

Cocky little bas- oops, I won't swear. Promise. *crosses heart*

This is a funny plotline!

Why does life never go smoothly for those who wish for it to be carefree? IT'S A CONSPIRACY I TELL YOU!

I like this, it reminds me of the Twelve Kingdoms book series. *that's a compliment, I love that series*