Great work! I like this story. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Make yourself comfortable by reading some of my works.

Thanks for updating. I like how the story is going so far, and can't wait for the first case chapter. There are some grammar errors and spelling errors that still need some work on, okay?

Hope to see more soon.

interesting. i wonder what creatures you will invole and where he will go. were-animals, ghost, vampires, whiches, shapeshifters the options are ENDLESS.

This is quite an interesting story you have here, Shadow. I wonder how this turns out. The characters appear interesting too. Like what Rab says, there some errors that can use some work with.

Hope to see this updated sometime.

It's an interesting idea and I like Micheal Hawkk, but there are a great number of distractng misspellings. You really need to watch for that sort of thing.