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| starsfallen 2008-05-18 ch 1,   | This was great I love the line "and together we shall twril in winter-blooming flower petals". I can't agree with you more, that would be a tragedy. |
| fairytale failure 2008-05-17 ch 1, | I really like your figures of speech in this poem, especially the metaphor in stanza 4. I also thought the simile 'the my imagery will deflate like a balloon' was really good; I could picture it so clearly in my head. |
| Faith Adeline 2008-05-16 ch 1, | I like it, very cool. Good piece :) Faith |