Reviews for Shadows of Before

Kenly 2008-05-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseThere are some grammatical errors, but it's very interesting. I feel bad for her, but at the same time I almost want to say she brought it on herself, so she has to live with it. I hope you're writing more.
Lady Silver fang 2008-05-18 ch 2,	abuseOkay it wasn't bad at all. As with the chapter before(I believe I mentioned it)there were a few mistakes but they weren't to noticeable. However, I did have a small problem with this sentence.. "He would also risk his own banishment or death and that was something he was not willing to do." It was a little confusing, I honestly wasn't sure if you meant one thing or something different entirely but I'm probably just being slow lol. Anyway, I have to say I like Eleni(not just because of the spelling of her name)I thought the scene with her hugging Manix was adorable. A weeping guy in a story never hurt! Anyway, overall the chapter was great, and I hope you update soon. ~LadySilverfang~
Lady Silver fang 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuseFirst review woot! Anyway...Not a bad start, could have had a lot more detail here and there though, and there were few spelling errors as well, but nothing to over the top. It would be interesting to see more things about her family, the clan, and her interest in the human world. Ahem, anyway udate soon!