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| brokencrystal7 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abusei am going to keep it simple and start to the point. I LOVE IT! :D please come and read my poems and stories. i would love to know what you think of them |
| maximusrexmundi 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, I like the style of this one. Keep up the good work, and sorry I havent had time to review for a while. |
| Mourning Sickness 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseStark, with a slightly dark feel and the nice touch of ambiguity. Very well done. |
| Manifest-Destiny-x X 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseThis made perfect sense to me! Beautiful and surreal LOVE IT. |
| cakenoodle 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseSometimes dreams are for dreaming the impossible... Easy to read, yet confusing and awesome. Keep writing! |
| Thermite 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseDreams are for dreaming, yes. But, Nightmares aren't for the sole purpose of scaring you. Easy flow, as well as an easy read. Very almost surreal, I suppose one would call it. Thermite |
| Jennifer 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI think that this is the only one of yours that I just completely don't get. I don't care if I don't understand it, it's still beautiful. -Jennifer. |
| Moondog Dozier 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseThe voice in this works well to connect the reader with the situation. I like how you've universalized the emotion while staying true to the tone of individualization. Well written. |
| Rock Music is my Muse 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseVery confusing. . . But then again, does any of your stuff make much sense? |