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Reviews For: Drifting

brokencrystal7
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abusei am going to keep it simple and start to the point.
I LOVE IT! :D

please come and read my poems and stories. i would love to know what you think of them
maximusrexmundi
2008-05-19
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting, I like the style of this one. Keep up the good work, and sorry I havent had time to review for a while.
Mourning Sickness
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuseStark, with a slightly dark feel and the nice touch of ambiguity.
Very well done.
Manifest-Destiny-x X
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseThis made perfect sense to me!

Beautiful and surreal

LOVE IT.
cakenoodle
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseSometimes dreams are for dreaming the impossible... Easy to read, yet confusing and awesome. Keep writing!
Thermite
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseDreams are for dreaming, yes. But, Nightmares aren't for the sole purpose of scaring you. Easy flow, as well as an easy read. Very almost surreal, I suppose one would call it.

Thermite
Jennifer
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseI think that this is the only one of yours that I just completely don't get. I don't care if I don't understand it, it's still beautiful.

-Jennifer.
Moondog Dozier
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThe voice in this works well to connect the reader with the situation. I like how you've universalized the emotion while staying true to the tone of individualization. Well written.
Rock Music is my Muse
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseVery confusing. . .
But then again, does any of your stuff make much sense?
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