i am going to keep it simple and start to the point.

I LOVE IT! :D

please come and read my poems and stories. i would love to know what you think of them

Very interesting, I like the style of this one. Keep up the good work, and sorry I havent had time to review for a while.

Stark, with a slightly dark feel and the nice touch of ambiguity.

Very well done.

This made perfect sense to me!

Beautiful and surreal

LOVE IT.

Sometimes dreams are for dreaming the impossible... Easy to read, yet confusing and awesome. Keep writing!

Dreams are for dreaming, yes. But, Nightmares aren't for the sole purpose of scaring you. Easy flow, as well as an easy read. Very almost surreal, I suppose one would call it.

Thermite

I think that this is the only one of yours that I just completely don't get. I don't care if I don't understand it, it's still beautiful.

-Jennifer.

The voice in this works well to connect the reader with the situation. I like how you've universalized the emotion while staying true to the tone of individualization. Well written.

Very confusing. . .

But then again, does any of your stuff make much sense?