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| Needa S 2008-06-30 ch 1,  | abuseBeautifully done! Write on and God Bless. |
| His Mercy's Waiting 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I loved the first and last lines. Interesting metaphors. Keep writing! |
| mizu no kokoro 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abusewow i loved how you expressed the theme of time in this poem. very profound in wording. the consistency in each stanza was well done too. |