Wow. This is morbid and disturbing. Especially the way you just casually talked about it and shoved it back in. Makes me feel like you're too busy to care about this little thing that keeps breaking and you're pretty fed up with it. You didn't even know it WAS broken you had to look down to confirm it.

I just love the way it implies how heartless we've been made to become.

And stick it back together later, who knows what would happen later? One day it'll completely fall apart and kill itself.

Great work as usual!

~fleur

I wish I was better at reviewing poetry; I don't have the technical expertise to break this down so I'll just tell you how it made me feel as a reader. At first I thought this was a little slice of life poem, but the end really tied it all up for me. I love the last line 'I'll try to stick it back together later.' What I really like about your poetry is that it is accessible and relatable - it's something I can see myself in, something that makes me want to come back and read more.