I love this. No concrit for you. favs.

Interesting. I had to think to understand, and I always like it when that is the case. I don't really grasp the meaning of the line "(your bed is my sand)", but I'm sure it will be stuck in my head for a while, and it will find some sort of meaning after a while. I loved the first and last lines! They both spoke to me. Fantastic job!
~Daughter of the Faeries