"My body was worthless and soon my life would be as well. "

That is one of the most effective lines I think I've read...

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I'm guessing someone .. :L wasn't happy with the 3 day sentence a certain Miss H got...

yeah, I do think this story is well written, and it has such a sense of Justice being served running through it, you know, like in the end .. all the things you do will come back to haunt you.

GOod job, and keep up the good work.