I actually had to read this one over a few times to get it >.< but I love how it has a deeper, almost secret message that you have to dig to find. It's really sweet when you understand what it means, but also sad...

~Raina

I am not one to usually fall in love with poems that rhyme at all. Yet this one draws me in, like a moth to a candle. Such art repeats in my head through out the day, ringing sweet words.

Okay really, nice work. It is true i don't like poems that rhyme but i love yours. Oh up there ^ I was just bored. Hehe Have fun writing

G.C

Whoa, I really liked the vivid imagery of this! And I liked the simple rhyme scheme that obviously wasn't so simple to adhere to :) Anyways, keep up the good work!

-T.S.