ack! I was actually going to skip over this one, because I honesty can't relate to it and usually with poems, I try to read something that I can relate to and understand but...wow. I'm glad I read it! It makes me want to get myself a guy that much more -sigh- XDD

And there were three pair of lines that hit me the most, that made my heart just stop and made me go "wow...I want a guy like THAT". The lines with the problems and solutions (amazing! Just what I want in a guy, to help me solve them instead of just being there), the one about crying (aww! So sweet!!) and the last pair of lines...those last two lines just...wow. Those were so powerful, and just...wow...amazing.

Even though I can't relate to this poem, I love it. It describes perfectly what I want in a guy (the description of the second guy); the sweet, caring type that can always be there for you. This is such a cute and sweet poem. Awesome!

~Raina

That's quite an adoreable poem. Like it's been already been stated, very truthful and raw, but however you look at it, it's still a very adoreable way of confessing your feelings for him.

Just, as a note on the side, I'd never show it to him. Ever. He may be fine with it, but personally if he did see it, I think that although it ends on a very sweet note, all the things that come before it, may be a little hard to overlook by the end.

Anyways, best of luck with the relationship.

I liked the honesty in this... and the rawness to the emotion. Good job!
Though I actually believe that love in itself stimulates a passion that no loveless relationship can emulate... but that's just me :)

-Thoughtful