wow there are some strong word choices in here

You once said you liked this one and wanted a review on it, so here it is.

I like this one. It has a lot of emotion in it - not that your other pieces don't, but this one is different. Interesting, unique, in a good way.

I like the first and last stanzas the best - and I can't pick out a favourite line.

"what a strange detour, a sharp turn" is brilliant.

Wonderful job, Julia.
Your turn. :)

--~Bee.

An interesting subject, or rather an interesting picture you paint. Love can mean more than "nothing" though. Remember that^^