Reviews for Muriel's Recipe - FictionPress.com

SEMMU 2008-05-29 ch 1,	abuseGreat job painting w/ words. Write on
simpleplan13 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abuseyour back yard was beautiful,.. backyard from their stems.. this is weird 'cause the their does not refer back to anything, but I like description cause it was different than usual flower descriptions. I like this piece because the descriptions are nice and the ending is just so true. Really nice piece! PS If youre bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)
Auraya 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abusenah ha ha! i get mentioned! I love the beginning, it's very strong, especially the "balls of fire bursting from their stems" and the "lilac beads that sucked the walls" and especially "drinking in daylight so it spread, golden, through their veins". It's just so surreal and ethreal. True, something's needed between "so silent" and "and the lilac beads" but my head is too tired to come up with any good ideas. I love iced buns! i really eat one now. I think the honey tasting like smiles is so cute, as is the "pirate treasure that can never be found again". Happy days! love xx