Saw you took this one down for editing . . . I loved this story, and hope you find inspiration to continue it. Good luck... Your baseball stories are my favorites! :)

I'd really love to see this complete.

love it! this is weird though to actually read an unfinished story of yours =D

Is that the end or are you just not writing anymore?

Aw...so sweet


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Hey, don't know if I reviewed you before, but I have read a lot of your stories in the past. Anyway, I really love this story. I hope you finish it one day. I love your new story too by the way. The one about the girl who lost her memory in the horse accident. Keep up the good work.

So I couldnt stand sara before and now I like her even less. Where does she get off!

great story.when r u going to finish.pls don't leave hanging u can do it.pls update

woah i can't believe i stayed up for this story it was really good! wait so this story isn't done yet right?

NO! I knew that was going to happen... it can't be his. Something has to happen. Dang it!!

xoxo
jennie

I think I may have an addiction problem... to your stories!

Love this one too! Can't wait to read more!!

xoxo
jennie

When are you going to finish this? How many more chapters left?

Oh and after you finish this and JPR I'm curious as to what you'll do then. I miss when you'd updated every day...sometimes multiple times. (:

Anyways, you should try a brand new high school story without the characters from your series. I think you'd do really well writing about a girl who is depressed and a playboy/jack ass who ends up making everything okay for her. I can just picture you writing this perfectly. (:

Anyways, I haven't heard from you in awhile so message me back please!

elle.bw

so are you planning on updating any time soon?

i havent read the whole story yet just some of the chapters but is this the end?

Oh you really need to update! This is killing me. Please update again soon! Please! This is my favorite story of all time...:)