I actually really like this story! It's refreshing, and I want to know what happens. Please do update soon, as I've noticed you haven't updated since May. Continue the story!

hmm...i can't wait for more to see what happens 6 months later ~ Alenor.

Dude! Very cool! Got me hooked already. Love the tension and the characters. :-) Can't wait for that next chapter...

-MM