that must have been one good orange :) good poem. i like how descriptive it is.

wow, that is realy what eating an orenge is like
great job

-C

Wow, this was a really cool piece. You described a lot of senses beautifully in so little words. Your choice of words was impeccable. I especially like the last line. It's so simple, yet it's not. I like the entire piece, really. This was a very unique and original piece.

-stix-

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intresting I've never quite read a description of eating a fruit before like this one. I think it's good
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