|Reviews for The Revenant|
| Tranquil Thorns 5/19/08 . chapter 1
I really like the fact that you chose the name 'Lenore'. P It reminded me of Poe's 'The Raven', and in a way made this a touch creepier for me.
I noticed a couple of grammar mistakes, (“I’m dreaming of you know” I said - there should be a comma after 'know') but nothing major.
I liked the ending, too! Pretty eerie.